Great for an elementary class...
Though a majority of newground members are probably just finishing up their elementary education, this is not really newgrounds material...
The cart crash might be a bit too violent and some New Orleans kids may be offended by the house going underwater.....
In all seriousness though, the claymation needs work... For claymation movies, i'll vote high when I see something like wallace and gromit otherwise... they're all just.... :\
Peace
ughh
Maybe if I were in elementry school it would've been less of a torture. This is newgrounds and the general audience does not take pleasure in watching shows like sesame street.
improvements?
- focus on non-little kid age group
- add violence/nudity/language
- create a more complex story script
Funny, you're the first Newgrounds reviewer to not like it, so I'm thinking maybe people do find it refreshing to see something without:
-adult themes
-violence/nudity/language
-complex stories
Plus it was made for elementary school kids anyway, not Newgrounds. Just thought some people might like to see it. :)
Very creative.
Must have been a treat for elementary children. verygood job
Ahhhh
I swear, there be a statue erected in your honor. The simplistic genius of this cartoon just works so well with the song. Fantastic job.
Wow!
I have not seen clay animation at its best for a long time, and this reminded me on how it's supposed to look. =) Beautiful!