humerous
The plot had potential, was well executed, a bit more exageration would definitely emphasise the humour. I laughed when he started crying, it was a bit lame, though i still enjoyed it. Good work, and I look forward to Hewitt, I didn't get to finish it, let's just hope Casper gets back from holiday soon ey? =D
cheers
not bad
but the music made my ears bleed
Rofl
Man, he just created what happens in Runescape(N00bscape as i call it).
interesting
not a bad flash at all, i like your style of drawing. I also like the music because it like went along perfectly with it. The ending though was just soo.... wow... a let down kinda.. i mean i didnt see that coming at all.
Nice animation - sudden end? Oo
I liked your animation very much ^_^
The style, the graphics, everything was just fine! The animations themselves could be more smooth but don't worry about that.
The end was a bit odd. As a watcher you wait and wait for a kind of climax at the end. The scene with the picture was funny but not "enough". The final scene (rupture of the pic) was ... well... inappropriate?
There was no real clou at the end. Try to make one the next time maybe.
And by the way: You don't need any kind of hentai to make your animation more interesting. :)
I hope you are not mad at me now O_o"
Everything's just my opinion ^^
No. I love getting constructive critism. It'll help out in later movies. And you're right about the hentai :)