Meh....
it was alright it wasnt very funny and that happy or haffy geezer, who comes across as some amish playa wanabe, voice did my head in it sounded like you used the onboard computer voice for him, but the visuals were of tv standard i can imagine MTV having a show on with that sort of art work you just need to work on the comedic side of things.
that is all
Nice
That was funny.I thought there was a girl and stuff.great job
Not Bad
I liked it. The sound quality was really good on this. As someone else said there is none of that annoying ass static from cheap microphone recorded sound. Like to see more from you possibly. Add more humor too(the humor in here wasn't bad but needs more.) Looking forward to more!
i really didn't care for it
i thought the voice acting was rather cheesy along with the dialog
it was sort of a cringe to bear
however
at least the animation was fairly solid
some of the motions seemed slightly awkward
but aside from that it was pretty good
the ending of it felt really empty too
the introduction to his girlfriend was a surprise
but the it was weak finish in my opinion leading
to a rather abrupt ending
Haha chris girl is Flat
Shes flat chested and is soooo skinny she makes paper jealous lol
thanks for the positive review... I think? Anyways, i don't expect everyone to enjoy this flash or find it incredibly humorous, but please do not judge so harshly if you have never created nor wrote a story yourself. I respect the critics that say "it was to choppy" or "the story line could use a little extra." But when the reviewer just dogs the animation with no justification then I think that is a slap in the face. If you feel you have wasted 4 mins of you life on this toon then you should of stopped watching it way before the first min. Maybe you thought that there would be nudity or a fight scene but i decided not to go with the normal route.
However, don't let this response take away from other negative feedback. if you did not like the toon then tell me but tell me why with reasonable input.
Thanks - Lil' g