Nice
Much better job on the voice over
Reviews for "CoreyStuckInPurgatory II"
hehe
cool, the bees were cool, but when he jumped up and landed to dodge the bees, it looked too xiaoxiao for me lol. it looked like he was going to kil them all or something, which is something that i dont think a regular person would try :D
Good Stuff, High Quality
I liked the first one better. This one was great, but it seemed kinda slow at parts... Like things happened too slowly, or sat in one scene for a tad too long where I noticed I had noticed I was waiting and consciously thought "OK, next?"
Love the scene where he runs up to the top of the "point" with the moon in the background.
WarpZone: If you don't like the "STAY TOONED" why not just watch the next episode? It's already on NewGrounds.
My honest imprerssion of the Corey series, part 2:
...interesting series, marred only by...
STAY TOONED!
better
certainly better than the first one. you might want to think about putting the play button in a standardized place. perhaps make it obvious by labeling it PLAY like everyone else does. figuring out that the crudely draw triangle is a play button is more than a bit difficult, hence the reason i rated your first submission so negatively.