Bravo!
Your piece is very well composed. I would only have one suggestion, and that would be to take some of the reverb away from the orchestral parts as in some places it becomes to overlapping. Alos, the beat you created to give the song a sort of urgent feeling could most definately have a more dominant role in your song. Lastly, I believe that due to your explanation above, you wrote this song for a videogame. If this is so, I just noticed near the end that the end of the loop slightly fades and comes back almost like a lag problem making it not as smooth as it could be.
Your music is excellent please continue to share your works with the world. One day you will be noticed and aknowledged as a true musical artist by someone of much higher stature than myself. Extremely well done.
Kiwanis Adjudicator <Septrica>
9/10
5/5