not bad
That intro with that frame has been done before. You seem to be a better artist than animator. The movement was a bit weak, and voices sounded a bit out of place The drawing was pretty good though
Reviews for "Illusions of Immortality"
hmm
I dunno it seemed kinda rushed. I thought that maybe a cool fight scene might make up for it but that kinda sucked too. Only suggestion I can make is that you should take more time on the next episode.
I know what your trying to do here...
Its just that it doesn't quite do it. Your going for a dramatic story, set in a dramatic environment, with dramatic characters. But it seems a little rushed, the voice acting is over-acted, and the movie clips seem to warp all funny. Just need to take your time on future projects...
Wasnt the best thing iv ever seen
Well i can see its hard to make a flash, but iv seen many flashs better than that one, (no offense intended), i think you couldv spent a little more time in developement to improve the graphics and scenery, plus i didnt really get the moral of it, so incase that was a sequel from a previous version i wouldve done an intro, a previous clip so peoploe can understand it, but again im sure i couldnt do much better so good work any way...
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Well, this is awesome. I got some advice. Finish it, put it on DVD, sell it at WalMart, and I'll save up to buy a copy. Yup, I have to save up for 10 or 20 dollars. ^^
PaulF responds:
Cool, maybe I will. ^^