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Reviews for "DBZ UBFE 1"

Actually...

If Goku did curse like that, that'd be hilarious!

DuDuL responds:

Curse like what XD

Nice job.

Seemed to be lacking much of a story, but it was still well done. The only problem I really had was when Goku swore. I mean, come on, that's almost as bad as say having Babidi be a good guy. Anyways, aside from that, very well done.

DuDuL responds:

Oh comeone... SHIT is not such a swore... yea i would agree if he would say
"HOLY MOTHERFUCKER SON OF A BITCH ON MY FUCKING COCK I DONT FUCKING SENSE THAT MOTHERFUCKER VEGETA" yea then i would agree XD

OOooo harsh

Maybe it was deleted the 1st time cuz a mod say the following in your comment:"EDIT 1... W00t i get today online and see 3.4!!!
WHATS WRONG WITH YOU PEOPLE!!!!

And the mod may have taken it seriously, but o well.

This movie was sick, like I said in my other review, and I cant wait for pt 2.

DuDuL responds:

It was my own comment xD... and i fixed text and bugs thats all... and i deleated it

Not bad.

The fighting and animation was great, but the story isn't very good. Babidi "somehow" comes back? That doesn't make much sense. And if I remember correctly, there's a limit to how long one can use the Hyperbolic Time Chamber in a lifetime, and Goku had already used up his time there. And you had a ton of spelling and grammar errors. Don't just throw some half-assed dialogue in your movie, it doesn't look professional at all. Please, for everyone's sake, make an effort to perfect the script in the future. And if you don't think you can, at least have your friends look it over. It would be well worth it in the long run.

DuDuL responds:

First its fan story... second... oryginal dbz also had bugs... like 3-4 ppl in time chamber... third... i couldnt think of anything better for babidi's comeback... xD

nice

is vegita going to stand up?

DuDuL responds:

Yea he will