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Reviews for "Random Stick acts"

lol

sum funny shit, how long did it take u to make it?

WHRentertainment responds:

Well all of this was made in the last year in school so i sent the animations home and managed to make it into a random movie

Not the best flash around.

It's mainly down to the graphics and stuff. I mean, if you'd taken more time this would have been pretty good. I like to see random spontaneous things, but this seemed a little weak. Not very long, and just seemed like a 30 seconds gore fest. It was pretty funny in places, but it could have been done a lot better. Keep trying, the only way is improving!

WHRentertainment responds:

C00l thnx for ur review

Sorry to say this, but not very good...

But i know how you could improve it.
Watch more examples of what your idea is, and look carefully at how it mught be done.
Experiment more. Practice more. Don't be afraid to delete or redo things that look bad.
Second times usually work out better. And please, for your sake, please don't submit anything untill your ABSOLUTELY pleased with your work.

You can do it! :)

WHRentertainment responds:

Thnx for ur help but i simply have no time for that i got tests and shit i just submitted this becuz i might not be submitting for awhile.

hmmm....

Hard to say my opinion about it.....
I'm not very fond of random movies.... It was ok I guess....
But could have been alot better....
Better luck next time...

WHRentertainment responds:

K thanks

ok

Its good, it shouldnt be blammed, but you could always improve...?

WHRentertainment responds:

yh thanks for the review and true evereyone one has to improve