Suprisingly Great
-GOOD-
This was a big change from your guys last movie. Your last one was gloomy and shit but this is happy and fun. I loved the graphics and how everything was bouncing. The artwork was good and I loved the backgrounds. The music was great and went with the flash.
-BAD-
Well I was watching this nfun flash and all of a sudden it ended... FINISH IT!
-OVERALL-
I love it but make sure to finish it.
~Review Request Club~
Thanks for your honest review yes it is unfinnished and It will be done dont worrie sorry for the short ending on this.
~RampageClock~
Pretty good for a new Crew. owait, MAFIA. lOl.
Well, since im such a nice guy, lets get this over with.
~Good~:Catchy music
Fluid animation
Pretty good concept
~Not so Good~: Graphics
Kind of Uncreative
Not completed
This isnt anything you cannot fix. I see you as a great animator, and you have plenty of potential later on. Keep up what your doing, maybe work on your artwork a little, and keep it up. I like where your work is going.
Best regards, Martini 92
Thanks for your input on this your right it wasint finnished and for that were sorry but we are going to make it longer till the song ends,again thanks.
~RampageClock~
Cool
The graphics were good and the animation was too. The loops were cool too. The style of this is good because it's original. It's a sun mafia. The sound was really funny. It was all happy jolly. There was no violence. You couldv'e finished the movie with a rocket hitting them at the end. The humor was there too. The preloader button made me laugh.
Overall, to improve, finish the movie on a different note; It just stopped abruptly. Also, add some violence.
3/5
Review Request Club
Thanks Homer Dough Im pleased you liked it yeah were all about being heppy go lucky and have fun frollik in the flowers and fly into space and just have a good time and dont worrie the next one will be full version and wont stop abruptly.
Thank you for the possotive feedback and we will finnish the next one promise.
~RampageSun~
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This was a very good flash, but a few things let it down. First of all, it ended way too abruptly. You should've made it longer, and end not so suddenly. Also, it just went back to the original Play button. Why not have a Replay button? The music fit very well with the flash, and the graphics and style were excellent.
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AWARDS:
Graphical Achievement | Clock Crew Wannabe | HappyHappyHappy Award | Abrupt Ending Award
3/5
* Review Request Club
~ Z
well eehhh thanks for the feedback yeah sorry it ended too soon part 2 is bit long but be warned it will also cut off Like first one But the part 3 is still being made and will be full version.
Not a CC wannabe/Happy award I will take/abrubpt ending award...eerrmmm still in question heh.
3/5 score Not bad thanks its not a bad score or good its ranked as fair so i thank you for that.
I was RampageClock But now I formed into RampageSun and joined up with the SunMafia.
~RampageSun~
Great!
Although it's a short animation, it's done really well. The artwork is very impressive and i think you've really achieved something here. I like the fact that your flowers and grass looked as if they were inflatable, that really gave it a nice touch. The music however, not my personal favourite, S Club 7 :P Still, you made it decent quality which is more than i can say for a lot of submissions that get past the portal. I think you should re-submit this with more, which is what i think you're going to do already so that's good.
Well done! :)
Thanks Stagnant The artwork and movements were all thanks to RaspberrySun I just help with the odds and ends of it.
Next one that I'll re submit will be full Version and wont cut off Like this and the part2 and Im looking forward to hear your review on out next one.
~RampageSun~