Even the author's note hurts my eyes.
Throw several pop-culture names, stick figure animation, bad tweens and effects, leetspeak and squirreltalk in a blender...you'll get something resembling this flash. I suppose to some people it does have a certain geeky charm...but I'm not that kind of person. The effects were just thrown in seemingly at random; perhaps the author was going for an Arfenhouse feel. However, it worked for Arfenhouse; it didn't here. I'm not sure what constructive criticism I can offer on how to improve this flash; it was a good attempt, but I must rate it according to its merits.