Great Piece
I am a huge fan of the Mother series and Earthbound 0 is probably my favorite of the three. Your piece had some beautiful stuff, but there were some things that bothered me.
Transition was one. I felt it a bit off when a transition took place. And it felt off a lot...and in the beginning, where Mother Earth is being featured, it started beautifully, but when the melody came in over top, I felt that it could have been represented with a stronger instrument. The ending was beautiful, by the way.
I give it a seven because, while it's a great piece, it has some major flaws, at least to my ears. To someone else's, maybe not. But, keep writing music and getting better at your craft. Great job.