Nice job, and a credit to Spokane.
You made this in 48 hours? I'm quite impressed. I hope you win something for your efforts. Good luck!
The breakdown on my scores:
Graphics: 8. This may have been created in 48 hours, but the artwork still looked really good. There were a few places where things seemed a little choppy, but all in all, pretty good graphics.
Style: 10: Nice plot, and everything tied well together and made sense, both within the story line and within the guidelines for the assignment.
Sound: 10. Music and voice acting were both right on.
Violence: 7. There was a bit of violence, both shown and implied, but you managed to keep it clean enough for a PG audience. A nice balance there.
Interactivity: 4, thanks to the play and replay buttons. Since this wasn't meant to be interactive, this doesn't count against you.
Humour: 10. I laughed at most of the jokes, and I'm from the Puget Sound area, which, as you know, is about as opposite of Spokane as one can get. Funny concept and great lines.
Overall: I set the minor graphics flaws aside because of the time constraints, so you've earned a perfect score for this movie. I just hope you'll get the same recognition from the folks for whom you made this! Good luck on your contest entry, and please let me know how this does.
10/10 and fifened.