Reviews for Shin ArkAngel - 01

[Rukaii]

Needs Improvement, but is quite enjoyable

Okay, I rather enjoyed this one, but there's a few things that were missing that would've made this a heck of a lot more entertaining. For starters there was just waaaaaaay too much time of "no background music" you at least need voices to pull that off and you had neither voices nor music for about 50% of the video. I suggest if you can't find voice actors, make the score drive the mood of the scene. The graphics are pretty good, I'm never one to judge this much because I'm no artist. Interesting style. The only funny scene was the motorbike scene - else it was pretty serious, and I like that.

So, either add more background music or get voice actors for the next episode and I think you got yourself a pretty interesting start to a series that has piqued my curiousity. Keep up the good work.

[timmer919hep]

I didnt think u cud get any more cliche

The art was good though

[stupidknowsnobounds]

Too cliche but maybe the plot will change in #2

The graphics were good at slow scenes but choppy and bad at the scenes with more action. Your style gets average because of two things Gundam and Eureka Seven, your flash may turn out different but it so far seems to be a fusion of the two with more Eureka than Gundam. Sound, only noticeable sound was the Japanese pop, which I'm not a fan of. I guess you could consider a bit of it violent. Finally, as far as humor goes this flash was pretty dry. The only thing that could be considered funny was the motorcycle scene.

Onto the so far developing story....It involves a war! It's possible that the war could be something with meaningful insight into our own lives...but still once you have witnessed 4-5 mech cartoons with the stereotypical "nameless war that happened (insert number here) many years ago" you just get tired of the same stuff. All in all you have cliche mech cartoon elements and a plot that so far hasn't convinced me that this series will end up having anything else.

Heres hoping that episode two is better.

[MintySagara]

Looking Foraward to seeing this evolve...

I'm sure people are saying that this is, "Soooo Eureka 7" or, "SO0o0o0o0 Evangelion". However I do think that this can be a great series in its own right. You need to do somethings.

1.) VOICE ACTING! There has to be people you can round up to make a great cast for. Save dialouge bubbles for captions.

2.) A bit frame skippy. I know you said it was done in MX, so I hope to see something much smoother, especially with anime mouths.

3.) Lose the part thing. Unless, it's a really clever preloader in between scenes, it seems like your ripping it off of anime. Origionality is key if you want this to grow, and I want to see it grow!

[FleshSiren]

Eureka Seven is a wonderful series.

....It truly is...