Sweet!
Return of the Russian like janitor! I loved the first one, and this was cooly too!
Reviews for "janitor massacre 2"
its al'ight
The water effect ruined it.
Yah i dont get
didnt really make any sense, at first i thought he was gonna get pissed of from the kids and kill them but he didnt and then i thought the water thing would kill him but it didnt...and wats up with that room of bugs in glass...good animation, but no actual story or explanation of what the point is.
I don't get it
Please don't take this the wrong way, but that was a very poorly conceptualized Flash. I did like some of the obviously traced and reused running sequences with the bizzare pasted on heads. I also thought that the gloopy water effect was impressive. Overall, however, I found this to be extremely disjointed.
For one, the music goes berzerk between action sequences. The songs come to a complete halt and start up without warning. It's a pretty jarring effect, but if it was an intentional design issue I urge you change it.
The backgrounds really need to be done directly in flash as opposed to being imported JPGs. The reason I say this is because the movie is gargantuan in size for as long as it lasts. 10 megs??? around 2 minutes??? Unacceptable! I know you probably like the nice photoshop textures, but I really can't justify anything that causes to file size to swell so needlesly. And your lines are thick to the point of being distracting.
Lastly... what the hell is even going on with the title? There are some space cadet kids running through the halls and a guy cleaning what appears to be chicken broth off of a toilet. I can't fathom how this got the name "Janitor Massacre". It just makes no sense.
Critisisms aside, It had a cool look to it and I think it would be worth continuing. Maybe do up some storyboards beforehand, it couldn't hurt.
Nossers responds:
i get ur point and i kind of didnt get along with the storyboards in the first place but the new toon is a massacre and will be here soon, until i get a flash compressor i cant really get the files smaller, i'll see what i can do
wtf was that?
the animation of the kids was good, but the backgrounds had so many pixels or sumthing was wrong with it, and it made no sense. that movie sucked