not bad one
it was a pretty simple whack-a-moke style game... but a very nice twist with using clay for this one. i found this one to be pretty simple, but it was fun to play and your efforts were nice.
Reviews for "WhAcK A MoUsE"
TonioMiguel responds:
Thanks for the review. I have really enjoyed the amount of response to this game. I know its not the best but I do these for fun and to continually learn.
okay.
it's an okay game. the sound of the mice is a little annoying, but if it's your first game you did well on it. nice job
TonioMiguel responds:
You're right and by no means my last. I will be working on this game to make it more appealing. But if you have even played whack a mole the pop-up sound is just about as annoying.
I like it
I liked it, the idea of turning clay into a game is appealing indeed, but the sounds the mouse makes were a little bad. I think it would be better if something followed the cursor, like a club or hammer or a photo of your hand & forearm, just to give it an added touch.
TonioMiguel responds:
Another nice critique and an Idea I will try to see if I can implement (The whacking hammer.
Thanks.
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It was a good game and wasn't hard to play. However, the noise the mice make when they pop up is horrid. I couldn't play for very long without being annoyed by it. My ears have been violated.
The mice kind of looked like bacon. Yeah, I know that sounds funny but I don't know maybe it was the color or the angle or something. You know what would be cool? If there were different types and colors of mice instead of them all being the same.
I see that others have written you some pretty helpful reviews. I think that if you take their advice, you could make a game that is suuuuper amaaaaaaaaazing.
Peace & love!
TonioMiguel responds:
All your comments will be on my list of improvements. You get a blue star for being a good critique but the music was not bad c'mon...I promise I will make the pop-up less ear bleedable @*o*@
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it was good, BUT!!!!!
i think it was good, but you should improve some things. the whack counting was perfect. so , quit it guys and click at the head of the mouse ONLY when its fully out of the paper box thingy.got it?
however, you must improve the game, and make them, first stop shouting (the mouses) when they get out of the box (that hey sound) because when they get all by once, they all shout <<hey>> at once, and, its bad, to frankly, annoying.however, the sound they do, like oh!!! when you whack them (or hit them,) its pretty funny. keep it. also, make the song loop over (to start again, when the track is over) because at the 6 seconds, before ending the game ,the music sopped and it lost all the atmosphere it, had.if you dont know how to loop a song, then watch in the tutorials, the ultimate tutorial, 2.(and i KNOW its just the 6 seconds before it ends, but i think it would be better if the song played at all the game, im pretty sorry about thi). s however, also, add a backstory. it will be fun. (like a mouse got your chees, but you managed to hunt it, and you found it on a paper box!!!! take your revenge!!!! and in the ending screen, make yourself, holding the mouse in your hand, having an expression of happiness and revenge, and then , show to the player how many times he whacked the friggin mouse! it will be fun!!!! please, if you want, do these.it will make your game even better.thanks. bye....yeah...
TonioMiguel responds:
I have to say your ideas might earn you a slot on my second edition. I like the plot idea...Hmmm.... I think might just finally be able to mix in a claymation to add to the madness of this game.
Thanks a million you know how help programmers out! Gold star for you!