Reviews for Sweet Revenge!

[Senior-Scoot]

Dude..

Ok it was very good, kinda slow on the close up on the bullet going into the guys head close up. And maybe you should make sense because when he picked up the shotgun and then he somehow picks back up the guns and jumps? Makes no sense, make it simpler.

H-W-T responds:

Thanks for saying it's good, and i wasn't sure about the close up as well.

But i don't get what you mean about the shotgun bit.

[chris-ittner13]

nice

pretty cool flash needs to be alittle faster on the zooming on the headshot but other than that its cool

H-W-T responds:

Thanks!

And i wasn't sure if the zooming was too long or not as well.

[TonioMiguel]

Its an execellent start

This was good so hat's off to you. My only complaint besides it being short was just the length of time for the zoom out on the wound. It would have just been as good with either less frames of multiple jump shots.

I will be happy to see you continue to improve.

H-W-T responds:

Thanks!

And i thought the overall length was too short as well but i wanted to get this one out the way and see what people think so i can make a proper one with story.

And the wound bit i wasn't sure bout either i only thought it felt long because i kept watching it to see if it looked right but i was wrong lol.

Thanks!

[firecrackerboom088]

pretty dang good

for a stick movie this kicks ass besides being short. I loved your effects of coming through the door and doing the dual wield pistol. Good effects of blood and bullet holes as well. All you gotta do is make these longer and have a purpose. Something like this, except maybe 2-3 minutes long WILL make front page.

Darrek

H-W-T responds:

Thanks alot :)
And I knew people wouldn't like it with no story but like i said it's my first one and i'm just seeing if i can animate before i do meaningful ones.

Thanks for the review!

[Danielof2k7]

Yay... sticks

Cmon man the age of stick figures has been over for a couple years now. If you had simply colored in and detailed those animations it would've been awesome. SOAD is old and in too many movies...

H-W-T responds:

I know stick figures aren't that popular now but it was just a test to see if i could animate, from now on it's going to be fully animated and I'm going to put more effort into the artwork.

And for the song i was just trying different songs and Sugar worked well i think it was heavy at the fighting then quieter when it was zooming out of the head.

Anyway thanks for the constructive criticism.