Great Flash
Great Graphics - Great Story.
Looking forward to episode 2
Reviews for "Original Episode I"
poor corey
corey goes to hell what will become of him great animation keep up the good work
Great Work
Loved it. Very unique and the artwork was simply amazing. I'm excited to see your future work. Once again... Awesome.
some points
ok.
the graphics were very good. good job!
but the sound. wtf was that? i mean, my god, the soud simply fucks everything up! i was sure it was the next best thing ill i heard the voices.
please, work on it!!
but still i'm sure this one has HUGE potential!!!
4/5
One little things mentionned in your comments...
Just a little thing:
You mentionned how being lazy isn't a sin, except... Isn't 'sloth' one of the seven deadly sins?
Anywho, my one true major 'thing' is how the voices sound so grainy, as if they where speaking through a McDonald's speaker box. At first I thought it was an effect attributed to angels, which would had been neat, but alas it is a problem that seems to be affecting everyone.
It's just odd how the audio quality doesn't match up with the admitedly high visual standards in this piece.
Still!! Keep at it!
dnzTV responds:
true, sloth is one of the 7 sins.. but this story follows the Inferno story, which isnt really about the 7 sins per se, but more the environment of hell, you know?..besides if you wanna find out more about why corey is in hell, you'd have to stay tooned :).. ihave to say tho, a previous commenter on this cartoon noted that hell is for rapists and murderers, not lazy people.. so opinions are divided on this one,.. i do understand your point tho..
the audio thing..yeah it bugs me out..you probably noticed the huge file size, and i had to seriously decrease sound quality in the cartoon.. PLUS i have a crappy mic :)thanks fer reviewing!