Very nice job.
What can I say that hasn't already been said? This was good.
Reviews for "In My Dreams"
Impresive!
What I most liked about this was the background art! great usage of gradients! you need to improve your character's lineart though, looks kinda cheezie, still great job. That reflection part was great! now you need to make a flash with that quality with an actual interesting plot. Overal great job! keep it up!
It was a good attempt to recreate A. Phillips work
Not as good as his work, his art is alot better but yours was pretty good I must say, but the music reminded me of something you would hear from Banjo-Kazooie and I didn't think it suited the flash very well, but it was deserving of the front page.
AtmosGames responds:
Thanks bloke. Hahaha. It did sound like Banjo Kazooie. Since I love that game Ill take it as a compliment. :)
And thanks for the front page props.
Alright, not perfect
Didnt make any sense but the clock at the beggining was plenty good. (gave you a bad score on style because the only things with style weren't very good, wasn't your idea, and wasn't made by you.)
Same Page.
I understand the message, or the story to the movie. Reading some of the past reviews had me really concentrating as to what the moral or whatever you wish to call it was. Really, It was basic. But pretty clever at the same time.
I think the problems I noticed in this weren't huge, But they stuck out like a dog wiener to me. Basically you had these amazing, Well drawn backgrounds and water and so on in the film, And your character would look like a big blob of crayons. Although, Maybe this was used to implement him more in the dream, ya know as sort of an out-of-towner to the dream itself. Because I considered this, Which would have been pretty clever, I didn't remove any points.
Also the animation and motion seemed really jumpy and not very smooth at all. For something lasting 1min, And not having countless frames, or a whole lot of sound, Its strange that its 3.2 megabytes.
But in all it was a good movie. Well drawn pictures most of the time. Good sound choice when it was used. Everything working correctly, Good storyline and ending, Not the best motion though. Overall, You did well. You really need to touch up on your motion though, I think that was the low point.
And if my drawings theory was wrong. You got lucky :)
Not bad though, Not bad at all.