Very Good
This was a very good film. The animation could have been better, but it was also the animation that helped set the style of it. The story was cute and sad. The audio could have been improved a little bit, but aside from that a really nice piece.
There was something about the story and characters that was really good and would make an audience want to keep on watching.
Good work was put into this and it paid off.
Nice.
Excellent Storytelling Technique
This would certainly make for a different kind of series on this site.
The only real gripe I have is the lack of voice acting--only quacking sounds and text make up the conversations. But the wretched little girl was well performed, though somewhat stiff (not very).
This has excellent potential for a series unlike any other cartoon on the site. Few are considered serious shorts, and this one is tough to call (considering that dog got maimed). However, I'd say this one's a serious short. It showcases two souls alienated one way or another by the society they fall victim to. It almost sent a tear to my eye.
I almost didn't review, much less even watch this flash due to the title--it's a misleading one, and you get so used to utter garbage being submitted. I'm glad this one proved me wrong for once. Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to Episode II.
Thanks! I'm glad you did review it in the end, it really motivates me try better and address what I can improve for the next one.
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awwwww that poor trash. i feel so sorry for him. keep up the good work.