The best of both
For crappy animation (kinda) it had a really good story line and well used music. That was really good 8/10!
Reviews for "HALO: The Other Spartans"
great
for one i like your choice of music for two the graphics were great and three SPARTANS FOR EVER!!!!!!!! 8/10
this cant be ur first
if this is ur first i cant wait to see ur second it was well drawn and animated the thing was the sound effects a few more and a bit longer u got a good animation good luck with other projects .nice one
Nice . . . for a first timer . . .
I thought it was rather nice for a first timer, however, it was a little too melodramatic and everything went WAY too well, as no one was injured, just 1 person was KIA. What really irked me, and that I couldn't stand to watch (sorry, I really am, but it's the truth) was when they were running, the movement conveyment between the legs/feet and the ground was far too slow. I didn't like the quality of the voice acting, and the lines were kinda, er . . . cheesy. I mean like oh "Rob your sacrifice won't be in vein" I didn't really get it, or I understood it, but I just didnt see the point of having that line there, I didn't really see the connection. And also Tom's reaction time to Rob was a bit too slow, I mean, like 3 seconds not moving, then he just suddenly is flipped and is facing Rob; it was too choppy. As well, the laser that hit the control panel looked like a web ball spun by Spiderman. But I liked you're music selection. However I didn't see the connection between the pods and the factory too well. Otherwise I liked for your first one. BTW, look I'm not trying to be an asshole or Simon Cowell.
Not so good
You forgot Lucy!!!!! and you mixed up the description its not the 2nd its the 3rd cause if you read all of the books then you would know why. Other than that you sort of did a nice job.