I wish my stalkers where like that
all I can say is that if all stalkers where like that I wouldn't be hiding in my room all the time but sadly it doesn't work like that atleast for me
Reviews for "Alas, A Stalker"
(( NOTBAD ))
~~REVIEW~~
This was notbad, i think i saw one of your other ones, but this also needs color it would improve so much on this, nice animation just needs more to it, but it did present some nice animating so nice job there, anyways keep up the good work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some color would be nice.
~~OVERALL~~
Another neat animation, i like the animating..
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It was alright
I think it was alright...The graphics were okay, but I just which it had sound though.
Eh.
You have a long ways to go. I gave you a five for the save points, but this toon probably deserved much less.
Things to work on...
-Higher frame rate. You're toon was way too chopy. It may be more work, but it's worth it, trust me.
-Color. It's not as hard as you think. You just have to make sure there arn't any gaps in you're shapes before you use the paint bucket tool.
-Sound. Music will go a long way pal. All you have to do is import a song (wav.), and put the song on a key frame.
-Fluidness (is that a word?) You don't have to make an entirely new drawing per every other frame. Erm,...what I mean is that I noticed places where objects changed positions when they didn't have to. Example: that table the guy was leaning on kept moving at ther begining. This type of problem is easy to avoid...but I don't think I can cover it in this review...
Im not taking it easy on you because you say it's you're second toon. In fact, im not taking it easy on you at all. My first frame by frame was way better than this. However, I think you have alot more potential than me. I can tell that if you take some of my advice to heart, you will aspire to be a kick ass animator. Shoot for the stars dude. If you have any questions, don't be afraid to email me.
reidavidson responds:
Ah ha, I'mma girl, not a "dude." XD;;; But thanks! I like that you gave me lots of good suggestions and hints. ^_^
Hum..
Needs sound. You should also check your framerates as things seem to move very slowly as opposed to the fluid style you were trying to allude to.