This is great!
The graphics aren't the best, but you have tried hard, and that is what counts in a movie.
It is a great movie. It deserves to stay!
Reviews for "Primal War 10"
I'm torn
There are parts of this series I liked but also parts that kind of bothered me. The backgrounds are always nice, thats for sure. The character designs are top notch. But the animation of the characters often seems...lacking. Not to say its awful, not even close, but its just a bit awkward at times.
Besides that, the only thing that gets to me is that the lizard-woman has breasts. I mean you can get away with giving the animal-women breasts because they're mammals, but lizards do not have nipples or breasts because they do not create milk. Lol, obviously we're not looking at historical fiction here but still.
What's is your motivation?
I always watch your flash movies, I'm interested in what you're doing. I just don't see where your motivation is however - everyone says time and time again your sound needs work, and every time you take little baby steps in the right direction - this one had great SFX but they were completely ruined by the voices! If you want to step up and be one of the greats, you've got the graphical skill and perserverance to do it - you just need to get something from these NG reviews. Sure they're not all written kindly but they've got valid points. For your future work I would seriously work on your voices - just use people talking!
If you wanted more fans I would also suggest replying to some reviews, putting in proper loading and exit screens (yours are invariably halfassed and always have been), having friendly author comments etc. You just don't seem to care - if you don't, that's cool - if you do, show it. With the skill you've got there's got to be a reason your movies aren't scoring as high as they could be and achieving the front-page they could well warrant - you've got to attend to fans and the like.
Yes anyway so you're on the right track - personally I don't feel your episodes have enough happening in them, but then I've had that gripe with every flash movie (that isn't mine, heh) - other than that, keep smoothing those animations out (if your woman walking had polished movement it would've been hot - as it was it looked like jelly. I saw the wiggle but it didn't work because the lines were everywhere). The SFX are great it's just the voices.
so distorted
I'm guessing this series has gotten so much attention because there has obviously been a lot of work put into it. Given that i still dont understand what you are doing with your animation and drawings. 70 percent of the time it looks like you drew some thing, and went into the transform mode and forgot to hold shift to constrain proportions or some thing. PLEASE STOP! i dont know why you are doing it, and letting it get distorted, but what you are doing to it now makes it look so bad. There is no way you are drawing them like that, i dont see any reason why you would want things to be twice as wide as they should be and distorted.
As far as just for this episode, im not really into chicks that are half lion, so her big boobs and ass just kind of made me uncomfortable.
RickMarin responds:
I ll fix that problem
Graphics were good but...
I won't say the animation wasn't very good in this its just that it looked like you had way to much fun drawing that girl. I mean seriously. yes women have boobs, get over it. And some of the time when she stood it looked just way over done. The animation was good but for once i'd like to so an animation starring a girl who doesn't look like she goes to the plastic surgen every week.