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Reviews for "Primal War 10"

Another one great piece of work!!!!!!!

Just like i said this is another great example of your work with briliant graphic's like a cartoon and a great story line.

To the guy that complaint about Nacas Breasts i have to say that we are not talking about animals in this movie but for none human beings with animal characteristic's,
so the purpose of Nacas breasts is
1)being sexy (If you are not a gay you will definatetly find her sexy)
2)To differentiate her from a lizard cause we are talking about a human/lizard being.

I will also agree with the guy that found animal noises annoying,
so you should try find some persons for voice act (a pretty sexy voice for Naca and a strong voice for the tough princess).

Keep up the good work and for once again please don't kill Naca!!!!!!

RickMarin responds:

Thanks I always like reading your reviews , it inspiring, and I might have to change the ending with Naca , ........might

Love the series!

I've watched all of the episodes now, and I enjoyed watching them all.
The only thing that I don't like... is the "animal" sounds.. they were pretty annoying.. <.< But besides that, this series is really good ^^

RickMarin responds:

cant afford voice actors , there are alot of characters and a little volunteers but when I do the DVD version that will be a different story/ oops ,I said too much

What's is your motivation?

I always watch your flash movies, I'm interested in what you're doing. I just don't see where your motivation is however - everyone says time and time again your sound needs work, and every time you take little baby steps in the right direction - this one had great SFX but they were completely ruined by the voices! If you want to step up and be one of the greats, you've got the graphical skill and perserverance to do it - you just need to get something from these NG reviews. Sure they're not all written kindly but they've got valid points. For your future work I would seriously work on your voices - just use people talking!

If you wanted more fans I would also suggest replying to some reviews, putting in proper loading and exit screens (yours are invariably halfassed and always have been), having friendly author comments etc. You just don't seem to care - if you don't, that's cool - if you do, show it. With the skill you've got there's got to be a reason your movies aren't scoring as high as they could be and achieving the front-page they could well warrant - you've got to attend to fans and the like.

Yes anyway so you're on the right track - personally I don't feel your episodes have enough happening in them, but then I've had that gripe with every flash movie (that isn't mine, heh) - other than that, keep smoothing those animations out (if your woman walking had polished movement it would've been hot - as it was it looked like jelly. I saw the wiggle but it didn't work because the lines were everywhere). The SFX are great it's just the voices.

I'm torn

There are parts of this series I liked but also parts that kind of bothered me. The backgrounds are always nice, thats for sure. The character designs are top notch. But the animation of the characters often seems...lacking. Not to say its awful, not even close, but its just a bit awkward at times.
Besides that, the only thing that gets to me is that the lizard-woman has breasts. I mean you can get away with giving the animal-women breasts because they're mammals, but lizards do not have nipples or breasts because they do not create milk. Lol, obviously we're not looking at historical fiction here but still.

Ok...

I really really really, hate all of your work. Your soundeffects sound very crappy, the animation isnt half bad, but your plot is just stupid animals in war, who gives a fuck. I dont care if you think im too harsh but i really hate people who make animals their main character by giving them human characteristics. I think its a waste of time.

[Nzxer]

RickMarin responds:

I really , really really sorry , but I tried my very , very , very best. oh well I cant please every one , ......ask my wife , damn , I m talking too much