Very cool
I can tell that you put a lot of work into this trying to get it just right. You were right when you said you don’t need to explain your story, people will pull their own meaning from whatever it is you do. I think you are a skilled animator and I am looking forward to seeing more from you. I’m going to look at some of your other submissions now. Voted 5
Awexome I'm always glad for fans. There are a lot of people that want me to make more stuff now, and don't worry check back on me on December first, I'll having something for you. Thanks for the good review!
I liked it a lot.
Yeah. Pretty cool video. Experimental videos are risky to put on though because they'll usually get a real high/real low rating but I think this one deserves more than what it's at so I'm gonna vote 5. Keep it up man.
Thanks for voting 5 and i'm glad you liked it, i'm gonna make more soon just wait!
Hehe
Coulda had a seizure from that whoa! Watching it without sound is very strange indeed... Maybe a bit more clearing up could help, random shapes and people running with flickering seizure lights aint gonna cut it for some people.
For the high though, man is it entertaining! Yeah, your overall is nine even tho the rest is 0.
Lmao i've never gotten an overall rating of 9 when everything else is 0. I guess it helps though, and thanks for the good and helpful review!
Interesting But,. . .
Here's the short of it all. Your work was good. The concept was a cut above average. Yet, I must admit that I found your "author's comments" a bit presumptious. You try to tell people how to vote. Or you tell them that the need to know the story before they vote. Well, is it not the mark of a good flash to tell the story well enough that everyone gets it just from watching? Like I said, the work is good, but you assume too much about your viewers. I got the intended storyline without an explanation. Your work was good, but there is room for improvement. The music definitely fit the flash. All the scores I gave were a cut above average, excpt interactivity and humor. I only award interactivity points for something more than a play button. Also, I only award humor if I laugh. I don't think that you were going for laughs with this piece, so I scored it accordingly. I would definitely look forward to you future works, however I do recommend that you do not write such presumptious comments as a lead-in to your work. It almost made me want to knock you down a couple of points or vote lower because of what you said. Keep that in mind, you don't want to plead for votes, but rather earn them in an honest efforted fashion, at least, I hope you do. Well, kudos on the good job.
Neurotically Yours,
NightSpawn
Thank you for an intelligent and helpful review. You know, a couple people have complained about the author's comments, so I think I WILL change them because you're right, if people get it then good, if they don't, then whatever. Thanks for the good review!
meh
a bitter orgy of drippy lines and silly looking monsters
there were however some moments of interesting effects and imagry..
also never use your own video in there...as the previous comment says.... disrupts the film and so on..
at the begining it was too random for me to really tell a story ..(go ahead and explain if you want)...and then the end with the car shase...it was like 2 min of it running and birds falling ...
i've seen a lot better rly..