great first time
The only problems i see are that the animation could be improved like it still doesnt flow too well and it should be made more interesting, it doesnt really have the best story and its not exactly a random flash either. keep on sharpening that knife and soon you'll cut a nice little place here on newgrounds.
Thanks man ill work on improving (=!
Eh, needs work.
Alright, it could use some work. Interesting idea, but everything happens so slow. Like the effect of the speech though. Just make the action happen faster, maybe add some stuff, and work on graphics. Graphics, graphics, graphics.
LTD
Thank you i appreciate your feedback.
didnt really like it
and to your comment about trapeziums comment: get a life, he was just giving his opinion you dont have to be a jerk to him if he is just telling the truth, which i think he is, all your animation was was pretty much this guy tweened across the screen, how hard is that? not very. Dont be a jerk to people if you dont want to get it back.
Ok mister i overeacted. i admit it. I know i suck at flash buthow does it make me feel when people who have no expiereince put me down?
The music was good, but everything else wasn't.
The idea behind this was unoriginal to say the least, and the animation was truly poor, but I felt that the music redeemed it; it was both catchy and enjoyable, and I think Flashburn did a very good job with it. The audio doesn't save this drab flash though, particularly when the song ends and is replaced by some of the worst sound effects this side of the internet.
Thank you for your time. I hate it when noobs act all high and mighty. FLash by Trapezium: none. Get a life