Meh
Listen, try coming up with a new style of characters why does everyone in north america insist in trying to make everything look like anime, don't get me wrong i love anime but i would love to see everyone just come up with new interesting characters and the peopel who do that get 1st place on this site. It was however interesting until the end because God only know why a ninja and a guy who just paid $275 bucks for a Wii would try to kill eachother and then give it to a douche bag kid with a hat and a scarf. Then the kid got hit with a bus so i was like alright atleast the kid got killed at the end but then the ninja and guy show up at the hospital to give the kid a present like wtf? Anyways you can either read this and not take this negatively but a way for yourself to improve or you can take it negatively(which it shouldn't be) and keep making stuff like this. your choice.
-McFly