Fuckin Creepy
Holy Crap! Dude you are amazing I was getting crreped out here at my house cause I have the lights off and its like 1 in the morning. Good Job on the crrepy touches in the background. Just in case you guys didnt notice there is a face in the window of the door when hes looking in the bathroom
Err, yeah.
This sideshow is amazing, and really brings you into the story. You get scared then want more. What did you use? Subliminal messages, like the exorcist? Anyways, I am happy to have seemed to notice more things than most others that reviewed this... I did not just see the shadow at the end, but I saw a figure on the road (while the protagonist was driving), That same figure looking through the window (before he tries to open the closet), and what was that thing in the toilet?! Anyways, great job, waiting for more.
Living up to the original.
First there is something I have to add to this review, which I forgot to add to the review for The Orphan: Part 1, his voice is extremely creepy, and horrific sounding, no wonder that guy turned his offer of a room mate down.
And this is a great addition to part 1, as before, very creepy and horrific, interesting and suspensful, no wonder his new room is 99 dollars a month, after viewing its contents, and all of the bugs floating around everywhere, the place also looked abandoned, lol. I think anyone in their right mind would not stay in a place like that, especially the price, they would have to think something is up, the main character, not seeming to mind his surroundings, just lays down comfortably on the dusty tattered old mat with no problem, like hes been home there for years, this guy is crazy lol.
I love how you concentrate on the movie's background alot, with all of the nightly, spooky cloudly skies, the gloomy moon, dark forests, perfect atmosphere for your story, it makes you feel something is going to jump out.
I'm guessing now who the owner of the 99 dollar/mo, property is, probably some whacko? lol.
From the contents of the diary it seems there was a body in the closet, but the door was locked, are you going to reveal whats in the closet in the future episodes?
I'm excited to see part 3, I hope its just as quality consumed as these two, I got high hopes, because your a great artist and I know part 3 will be a hit.
About the small house again, nice touch, it fit with the price it was, it also fit with the storyline perfectly, abandoned, creepy, quiet gloomy, was that a shadow raising up behind the main character when he layed down?
Your a great artist, I've sucessfully added you to my favorite artists list, and pretty much what I said about the first movie can go with this movie too, graphics and style wise, sound as well, thank you so much for submitting this to us.
Overall score, 10.
Vote Panel, 5/5
xVegetAx, NG Portal Lieutenant.
Ah man
I love dark stories like these. You guys did an awesome job on the atmosphere and music. Really does keep me stuck to this. I am probably gonna watch Part 1 and 2 over and over till you make 3. :p This really does indeed inspire me to make a film based off this flash movie. You got yourself a fan. :D
Liked it, but intro seemed to drone on a little
That's my only real complaint, that when it seemed to finally start up, when he got in the cabin, it was over about a minute after that. Oh well, nice way to hook people, because now I really wanna see what's coming up after that. The sound quality in this is sweet, like with him walking over the floor and every board creaking loudly. when I saw the curtain closed over that bathtub, I was thinking he was gonna open it and find like a dead body in there, but I guess not. the cabin itself looked so awesome, those were like actual pics of one right? some parts it seemed just animated but it was hard to tell. Heh, and I saw that shadow behind him when he turned the light off, I thought he was gonna get attacked by it, but then it ended.