Superb
I really love your style and your animation, the movements do need a little work though. Your sound is REALLY what lacked in this movie though, It sounded like it was horribly recorded, like at a busy strip mall.
And the voices you chose for the characters dont fit them at all! Especially the female character. Work on the sound, master your audio editing, and this movie will sease to amaze me.
P.S. Did that sound as cool as i thought it did while i was writing it?