Not too shabby
Kudos, bro. I personally love anime, and I could since a bit of Aaron McGruder-esque influence in your style, especially the facial profiles. I enjoyed the concept and stylization of the characters, although some of the scenes could have used a few more frames. While its not necesarry to draw out every single movement (as you are no doubt aware) there are some points where there the action looses its fluidity and seems to "jump" from one motion to the next without clearly defining what happened in between. Otherwise, great job, and I'd love to see more.
PS
Read through some of the other reviews, and I have to give you props on your level headed responses, cuzzo. People are generally idiots and you can always tell a person's character by how they respond to stupidity.