I like it!
It just is good. It reminds me of my own Ibby's Hair Restorer, only your art is maybe better with more 3D.
you might suffer from what I did- NGers asking "Whats the point?" It will be interesting to see the reviews etc.
Personally, I just enjoyed watching it; Also, I like pie!
Maybe you might take a look at IHR sometime and see the parallels.
Maybe you could do a little sequel of what happens to the pies- maybe one falls out of the lorry and gets squashed, one goes to the shop, gets bought and gets eaten by a family, one gets left in the window and stolen by whatever and one goes past its sell-by date and goes in the big bin behind the shop. If you don't want to do it maybe we will, with your permission. YesNo?
Best Wishes,
IceDragon64 of the Dragons & Spirits