Not too shabby...
Well done for your first flash movie, I'm not a Flash Artist myself, but I know a potential flash artist when I see one. The concept is definitely a plus, and I like where it's going so far. The problems are minor, I think you should speed it up a bit (it IS Sonic after all), and add more sound effects during the battle sequences. Other than that, congratulations on your first flash movie, I look forward to the next episode. :thumbs up:
yeah i'll def make the next movie a lot faster and im putting more sound in
Very nice
Very nice on your Sonic translation to Kingdom Hearts. Great First Flash!
Keep it up!
thanks i appreciate it
somethin new
i like the mix up u got goin on wit sonic and the kingdom hearts story.... jus put som more fightin in the next movie....
yea im a big fan of the kingdom hearts story so i decided to do my own version with sonic in it..
nice
can't wait for the next one. just dont make sonic, or knuckles have to use any weapons ok, they have tons of combat sprites (shadow's no exeption to this rule but he does choose to use weapons in addition to his chaos control, blast, and spear), plus sonic hates guns. as for their super forms, treat them as drive forms. you could let them know how to use magic though.
-everything in this review are only suggestions, and requests for future KHSS episodes, and should not be considered to be orders! (however, using these suggestions may make the series better)
pretty good!
For only a second attempt at flash this was pretty good. You should definately develop your technique and continue the series. Here are some things to consider:
I noticed that your sprites tended to loop a lot during the beginning, and at some other points during the flash. You could try slowing the animations down a bit, or varying them slightly.
I also noticed that the characters' speeches usually weren't that long, and it was a little annoying having to wait for the text to change by itslelf, so I recommend a "click to continue" feature or something similar.
Also, the art for those portals seemed to be a little lacking in my opinion. I understand you may not be great at art, but they looked a little out of place in comparison to everything else.
Finally, sound efects could be a nice addition to your work. But, if you want to keep sound limited to only music, that's nice too. Just make sure you strike a balance between too little and too much sound, as too much is annoying, and too little can make the viewers jumpy when it occurs.
It's minute details like these that help to improve the overall presentation of your flash. Keep up the good work!