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Reviews for "Halloween short"

It was O.K.

It was alright, 3/5. As for improvement, make the outside lines of your people a bit thinner, and make them a slightly darker shade than the color of the inside. Other than that, just put more effort into it, add voices, make it longer, etc. You look pretty talented, can't wait to see a long movie from you.

Not that good

you couldn't even spell replay correct. :)

Nice.

This isn't bad for a day's work. You should try outlining a story on paper first to make longer cartoons.

Good for something that took a day

Here's some stuff:
1) give your characters necks so they don't look so slouchy.
2) make it longer, needs more of a plot
3) big spelling error: "REPLAY"

prety cool

i liked the grey scale style with the grey lines...it looked pretty cool. the music also realy set the mood. but sorry dude...i blam anything without a pre-loader. it's a shame, this was cool... :(