Nice.
This isn't bad for a day's work. You should try outlining a story on paper first to make longer cartoons.
Reviews for "Halloween short"
Not that good
you couldn't even spell replay correct. :)
It was O.K.
It was alright, 3/5. As for improvement, make the outside lines of your people a bit thinner, and make them a slightly darker shade than the color of the inside. Other than that, just put more effort into it, add voices, make it longer, etc. You look pretty talented, can't wait to see a long movie from you.