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^^Good Points^^
This was a fair submission. You did an excellent job with the drawings. I liked how they were constantly changing slightly. The angles were just about perfect, you did an excellent job with making this realistic. The music also went well with this.
^^Needs Improving^^
I would have liked this much better if it were colored or at least had some type of storyline, even if a small one was incorporated.
I will probably do more in the future that hav storylines and colour. This one was just trying out the technique and seeing what the Newgrounds response would be (in this case, awesome). The funny thing is that this took almost no skill (except with the line tool, lol) and almost three weeks, it's only 30 seconds long, and it got awesome reviews. The Wrath of Dicey, which is like 2 minutes long, took awesome Flash skills, and took me almost three months, got OK reviews. LOL.
I have a kick ass computer.
Well, that rocked. Nicely done, must've taken forever.
Thanks, it did :)
I have a major kick ass lap top!!!
This was a pretty good flash, try it again with colour. that would be awsome!
I probably will do it with colour. I was just going to see if the concept was any good before I put extra work into colouring it. Thanks for the review, though.
Wow.
Well, I don't really know how hard the flash was, but I'd say it must be pretty hard for just one guy to do it alone, even for a normal flash. If you could do one with a guy doing fighting moves and stuff for like 30 seconds with added effects, I bet it will be killer. Good work with the motion capture too.
Actually, the funny thing is, I took some killer fighting video and I actually have a motion capture for it sitting in my computer :P
But yeah, it is pretty tedious after a while. But this motion capture was easier than a person because with a person, youy have to make, like, infinity lines because the human figure is curvy, but with 3D environments, it's just mostly straight lines. Thanks!
This would of been hell
I know exactly what this is like. a long time to make 3d motion capture in flash. It took me 4 hours to do a 3d sequence in flash by tracing over the scene and then putting it in colour and putting in the animated charater (for my upcomming flash abnormation)
Huh, that seems like it would make a good Flash. I'll watch it when i comes out.