I'm not very good at reviewing music...
I guess this should get points docked for Originality, but I'm not sure what Diversity means... number of instruments? Anyway, very clear, and with good amounts of effort. =)
Also, I hate to nitpick, but the song is called "Loss of Me." I'm just saying, you created a whole new rendition of it and gave it the wrong name. =P Also, there is a really fast version of it you may recall (the version that plays during the Steiner / Beatrix scene, if I remember correctly) called "Protecting My Devotion." Just so you know. =)
Anyway, good rendition. =)