Man you are on the right track
This has all the makings of a new classic anime series. You have the Japanese culture of sex appeal in their anime girls. You have really intense anime battles which by far is your biggest strength. I know I have not yet mastered speed action shots so execellent work.
You even have her have to come back to reality. Let me get this straight is she a real slayer or is it all her imagination? Or do I have to tune in to find out.
You got me hooked kid.