nice movie
a shame that youre the only one who finished his part, why don't you make the rest i'm sure it would look cool.
Reviews for "Doodle fight"
nice
***My review***
This is pretty good. hope to see another one of these in the future.
***Things to improve on***
Nothing. Except it was kinda short so next time make it longer.
***Overall***
A Fun Flash to watch.
What i thought...
I thought my self it was actualy going to be 2 doodles actualy fighting.
Next time you make and animation like this, make it longer for one but otherwise its a good flash.
it while it
Enjoy the idea of stickmen being placed in strange worlds. My favourite submission is Mr. Coo after all, which you should check out if you haven't done so.
Watched this 3 times.
++ happy ending
+ nice sfx for drawing.
-- The stick-man doesn't really react enough. When he's tussled up, he could struggle or scream. At the start, he could be walking or looking around to see the world he was just born into. He needs more life.
-- Not enough meat. I'm not complaining about the length so much as the fact that when stuff happens you don't really make us feel it. Kinda linked to the above complaint. When the end comes, yes it is a massive relief for him logically, but he doesn't look relieved or anything.
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Though not as great as I'd hoped, I did enjoy it while it lasted.
I hope you keep bringing more stuff out and look forward to future things from you.
Good but not great
I agree with Bezman. Its a good starting point but you really need to expand on it more. I think you should add some decet sound effects and make the stick figure react more. Maby even make it longer then resubmit. So on the whole I think this could be great with more work put in.