could use a little work
well, theres nothing wrong with your art and animation, thats for sure.But the real thing that could use improving is the story.There were ALOT of plotholes, and cliches.Also, you tried too hard to be funny.I can see where you were going with this, you were trying to make like a "shaun of the dead" kinda thing.Sorry, but i guess it didnt turn out so well.You arts fine, sound could use a little work, but the story,plot, and humor are the real issues with this. Fix it up a bit, and you'll have a great series.Good job though!