Short but good
This has great potential. You should make a longer episode.
Reviews for "Pensils"
nijnemans responds:
there will come one
:)
Train harder.
Your skills show excellent promise. Please train harder and come back. I have blammed some of your previous work because of atrocious spelling and short animation.
Good luck on the sequel.
nijnemans responds:
ty
im trying to bevome good
and once have my own serie on ng
the sequel will comme
i already got a cool idea
I was indeed OK.
Nice animation, but with little idea behind it. As I need a animator, which I now have, maybe you should get yourself a writer?
nijnemans responds:
there was not realy an idea, only a serie starter :)
i already got an idea for te next episode
thx for review
It was OK
What you should do is try to draw a better hand, and an eraser on the pensil might look nice. Also, try to add a story-line and make it longer. Try to add some better sounds to your movie. I like your animations though.
nijnemans responds:
ill add an eraser :)
but i can't find sounds to add them :/
so i used music
Not bad..
Too short, though. ><
nijnemans responds:
sorry
it was 30 fps
so it already was shorter then it had to be
next one will be longer :)
thx for review