lame
when you put something on newgrounds, you have to expect to be critisised. you'll notice that i havent made any flashes, and maney of the people who reveiwed this havent made any. if someone gives your flash a bad review, then dont say "lolol you r a noob u havnt made any" or shit like that.
onto to flash
its realy badly done, the animation isnt even close to smooth. it makes no sense, and the list of flaws with the person is to long to list
to improve, make smooth animation, better graphics, give it some sort of plot. hope that helps
(and yes i knwo my spelling is horable but if you have nothing better to do then creteec peoples spelling online, then get a life)