Overall very good...
...but you should really work on the Design of some Rooms and Locations. What was that Hangar? Just a Cube? Or the Generals office - A desk, a chair and maybe a cupboard, but nothing else? You could also use some Textures at the Walls to let them look like Concrete.
Also sometimes the Animation of your Modells seemed a little wrong. Try to fasten these Anims - I think itll help.
Good Work, pretty good. Liked to see something of Starcraft again.^^