Well-
Animation- Good
Humour- Crap
Narrator- You= Find a VA for crying out loud!
DO BETTER!
NEVER TALK LIKE THIS!
V
"STFU PWNED NWB!"
I give you a 2... Out of Five....
Reviews for "The Five Rules of Fun-Fun"
generic
4 out of 5 rules i already knew
I see...
I can see good detail in the background, may be you could try and give it to your principals too. Research the plot, look for something bigger. You have animation skills that you can work on. Just give it time... and loads of practice.