Hmm
Needed voices, Neil looked like shit, and the fact that there was only like, one sound effect at all, really hurt it. BUT, the Kirby was actually really well done, looked like Kirby should. You need to add some voices, some sound, and need to improve on Neil and some eyebrows (when Kirby got mad, the eyebrows just appeared, yuck). Otherwise though, it was okay. I thought that the Wii thing at the end was funny though.