You have done well
Yes I see that you have a good animation, I think you have got what it takes you reach the top.
Now this animation is about what happens when you steal. The reality is people do sometimes try to steal here, here is an anmiation that gives you the clear message on why stealing flash is bad. The storyline is amazing, also at the same time we see that the animation is not too great but it doesn't detract from the flash. I feel that this flash has good animation that's has a kind of unique signature, the eyes and the body posture of power and strength of heart.
You show in your music the feeling of what newgrounds is in essence, a meesage of being one and being with the community. I felt very happy for what you did with the audio, the thing that detracted from the audio was that there was no talking and sound effects. Howwever, you did fit the purpose n some way. I still feel this flash cpuld have had the audio effects.
In essence I say that you must watch this flash if you love storyline and anticipation of explosions. This story of strength and tom fulp+ Wade is amazing to anyone who watches this. Please wach this
Storyline 9/10
Animation 9/10
Audio 9/10
Overall 9/10
This is a great story, watch it. Reviewed by Hypern
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