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Reviews for "Ein"
HourglassProduction responds:
short but sweet thank you!
hey,
great! But i think you should really consider your audience, i don't think many NGers appreciate this kind of 'emo' stuff and would vote horribly low to 'counterbalance' the (nonexistant) emos on this site. Well good luck to it anyway.
I think there should have been more walking animation, unless you wanted Ein to just glide around like that.
HourglassProduction responds:
heh im still working on walking ^.^' so i guess we'll just let Ein glide for now lol but as i said below i wanted it to be a sorta dark(or emo) film so they could capture the real picture of what i was trying to send through this movie. Thx for the advice though if i make another paper flash ill be sure to draw feet. ^.^
Roddy-Poo
I love you!! Nice, I'll work on the site later.
HourglassProduction responds:
im guessing this is jon. plz work on the site soon im an animator and i dont understand html well oh and never call me roddy-poo evr again lol
School shootings never looked so good!
Excellent look and style, very appropriate for the mood of the story. That scratchy handwriting really expresses anxiety and primal emotion.
My only complaint is with the writing, as the concept of school shootings is a bit overused these days... I heard on CNN there's been 25 already this school year alone. It was a very generic school shooting too, without any real character development or interaction except the bare minimum. It's understandable as this is your first work, but building a deeper storyline to really show the character's pain and get more sympathy from the audience would make your work some of the best.
Great first flash
Very depressing and dark, yet a great ending. The style was very well done. The only thing that was wrong with this flash is some of the text boxes where the text goes off screen.
HourglassProduction responds:
as i said below i luv good reviews and they are always welcome!! oh and yes i just found out that the text goes off screen SORRY!! it looked fine when i exported it...i'll need to put more precision in my next flash thx for the review! ^.^