Absolutely perfect..
I'm not joking when I say this but in my opinion, every-single-thing in this track fits perfectly. The high-pitched distorted pluck that you've now brought into the second half of the peak helps to impact the feeling of worry or catastrophe as does the piano in the break.
I'm starting to see that you're becoming good with translating emotions and feelings with your tracks and it's great because it creates a connection with the listener. For instance, this track sort of paints a scenario in my mind. A battle in the future where one side can't win and is trying to overcome great odds or something like that. I know it sounds stupid but it's because of that mental picture that I'm connecting with this track.
It gives you something to relate to when you listen to this and the awesome mixing and structure work only makes it better. I know it's already obvious but this track makes it even more apparent that one day, you're going to be one of the biggest and best musicians around. Not to get all sappy but, you're probably my biggest inspiration in producing too. Even more so than all the professional artists I listen to and I'm grateful for that. So thanks for the great track and thanks for all the inspiration you've given me. It's because of tracks like this that I'm driven to keep going with producing.