Nice Animation
Great animation, i like the seizure affect hahah
not sure if that was what you wanted lol
Reviews for "-Asylum-"
Swished responds:
Heh, honestly i don't remember why i did that.
And it's an older animation, i'm glad you still like it =)
Pretty darn good but there's always room right?
I have to admit that I don't think it needs a massively descriptive background story. The mystery in just watching a story unfold that one knows nothing about is a perfect story. Mystery is a good dramatic tension.
Things to work on though (As this is a review):
1- The initial loading bar needs to be a little more obvious. I was sitting at my screen wondering if it was done because it wasn't saying "Ready" or "Play" anywhere. If a viewer is confused about something as simple as that it needs fixing.
2- Seriously dude THE FLASHING! If you're not going to re-do this animation and take out some of or lesson the strength of the flashes at least put a warning in your comments or before it starts because there could be people on the floor having an epileptic seizure. You really have to think about what people could be watching this not just you.
Ok that's all form me
Bad
Real suckish. The flashing lights made it like bull, and all the characters look the same. Try to improve on that.
Swished responds:
Well, why are you reviewing an older animation?
Of course it's worse than my newer anims, and youre saying
i have to improve on something. This stuff is from 2006, i wasn't
so good in that time.
it wasnt really good.
there was no story plot to this clip. Its like... a guy suddenly appears with an AK and starts spraying people along with his deagle... my eyes were also sore due to the constant flashing of lights which had totally no relevance to the clip.
hmm
To say the truth I wasn't impressed =/. I saw asylum 3 so before I watched that I watched this. . . .it really isn't that great. It's good, but not THAT good.