How touching!
This is fine material here on NG! It's really rare to come across this kind of flash! SO nice and romantic. XuX
The graphics are simple and good! It's not as bad as you think though. I'll check your latest works to have a look see at your improvements! (Well, you ARE already that good)... I'd also have to agree to your choice to not have character voices since we can pretty much already understand what's going on in the story. Besides, it's like they're talking to me through their eyes... hehe... I'd also like to complement you and the other contributors to the really cool creatures featured on the previous episodes! A remnant of the Magic Knights series, very well done!!
This is overall, a really good flash you've made! Congrats!! ^_^