Ugh
First of all, your grammar/spelling/punctuation needs work. Type it out in Word before typing it in Flash. Some of your sentances are runons and it makes it very frustrating to read.
The choice of music was good. You are also not too bad with actionscript (assuming you did the coding at least partially without help.) However, this type of game can get a bit boring without new ideas. You didn't bring much but a couple nof spinning things and scribbles that you have to get around. Most of the mazes are very easy to complete, as well. Also, try to make the instructions a bit more descriptive, for those new to the "genre." The practice was basically a one-second thing that I didn't realize I had completed untill I was on another level.
Otherwise, I suppose it's not bad for a first.