I Loved It
I love the concept, I love the story, and I love the animation. The questions posed are interesting to think about from a philosophical stance, but simply looking at the plot, I really like the situation that occurs. Hallucinations only occur when there is too much hate. When he hallucinates, he sees someone he loves. The love, in turn, stops the hallucinations. I love it!
I have two problems, however. First of all, the grammar/spelling/etc. is just shitty. It shouldn't be that difficult to go back and check your spelling and what not; I mean, the spelling is really just atrocious at times. I may have spelled that wrong :) . The point is, a misspelled word here and there is fine. But if it distracts me from the flash, that's a problem.
Second, I think this flash might have been more effective with some talented voice acting and some background music. I understand that, stylistically, that may not be what you had in mind, however. With that said, perhaps a different music choice would have fit with the theme better. I don't know, maybe its just me, but I just didn't think the music matched the flash that well.
Ultimately, I want to give this flash a 10, but the grammar and musical issues don't allow me to do so. I did, however, give you a 5. Just fix the grammar, and this is going on my favorites!
